Thursday, October 23, 2008

Onomatopoea

This is my poem using onomatopoea.


SWIMMING

The students jump up
They changed into their togs.
The students jump onto the bus.
Thump, thump, thump!
The bus driver drives off.
Broom, broom, broom
The children arrive at the pool.
The students jump into the pool
Splash, splash, splash.
Lots of training to be done
Swimming is so much fun!
Now it's time to go.
All of the students hop onto the bus.
Fuss, fuss, fuss.
We arrive back at school
change and do our hair
Brush, brush, brush
We look much better now.
No fuss, fuss, fuss!

1 comment:

Nicola Harvie said...

An excellent goal! Keep striving.